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	<description>I hate arguments. I love stories. I hate ideology. I love passion. That is all.</description>
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		<title>By: Southern Discomfort / Until I figure out an effective way to integrate Tumblr posts into this here blog</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2347</link>
		<dc:creator>Southern Discomfort / Until I figure out an effective way to integrate Tumblr posts into this here blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Dec 2008 10:25:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I have longer material I find necessary to post (for example: a follow up to what happened to my NaNoWriMo attempt, which was an extremely eye-opening experience for which I am deeply [...]</description>
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		<title>By: DaisyDeadhead</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2433</link>
		<dc:creator>DaisyDeadhead</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Nov 2008 15:47:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Speaking of sloppy, did not mean to comment twice. :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Speaking of sloppy, did not mean to comment twice. <img src='http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Southern Discomfort / Hillary Clinton for Supreme Court (or Secretary of State)? Hell yes.</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2336</link>
		<dc:creator>Southern Discomfort / Hillary Clinton for Supreme Court (or Secretary of State)? Hell yes.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Nov 2008 03:17:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] event, Feb 2008. Mariarosa (L) in Obama shirt; Annalisa (R) with Hillary sign.Oh I know. I&#8217;m not supposed to be blogging, much less political blogging. But I just have to say [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] event, Feb 2008. Mariarosa (L) in Obama shirt; Annalisa (R) with Hillary sign.Oh I know. I&#8217;m not supposed to be blogging, much less political blogging. But I just have to say [...]</p>
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		<title>By: vmarinelli</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2432</link>
		<dc:creator>vmarinelli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Nov 2008 18:25:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ha, thanks. I think (I&#039;ll have to check) by this point in the chapter (this excerpt is from the first third of one chapter, is preceded by at least a few paragraphs) it&#039;s established that we&#039;re in Virginia - and it&#039;s definitely established in terms of the whole book (this will be one of the first chapter, but not &lt;i&gt;the&lt;/i&gt; first chapter - they&#039;re being written completely out of order). But, I want each chapter to stand on its own, for the most part, as stories, so these are exactly the kinds of things I&#039;ll have to check as I go along, or at least return to later.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I&#039;m nearly OCD about the editing stuff, and it&#039;s kind of a problem - the idea of NaNoWriMo being &quot;save the editing for December and beyond, right now just get out the raw word count.&quot; It&#039;s a very different approach from the one I&#039;m used to, and I think once this thing is over, I&#039;m going to try for a more reasonable middle path, where I edit as I go along (but not excessively, since that&#039;s led me to lots of dead ends before), but I shoot for at least 1,000 words a day. &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I&#039;m kind of doubting I&#039;ll make it to the 50,000 word mark by November 30th at this point - which is okay, it&#039;s a marathon after all, and I&#039;m a first-timer - a number of participants have said it took them a few years before they made the entire word count in 30 days.  Of course, if it were only about my ability to generate words, I&#039;d be near the finish line already, between email, blogging, etc. (this morning I wrote 1,000+ words for a blog post I&#039;m not ready to publish yet) - but it&#039;s been hard to concentrate that capacity on the book, exclusively. &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;First, the material is &lt;em&gt;really&lt;/em&gt; painful (albeit with enough absurdity and occasional outright hilarity that it&#039;s not - to whatever extent I can speak objectively about the matter - a bummer to read). Second, although I&#039;m using fictional forms, nearly all of it is based on things that actually happened, which must be coherent within their historical context. I tend to go off on variously useful research tangents (examples: &lt;a href=&quot;http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/58548698/update-1-two-people-have-offered-the-term&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href=&quot;http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/58714308/kelloggs-sugar-pops-commercial-1972-via&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;here&lt;/a&gt; and &lt;a href=&quot;http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/59043569/in-the-mid-80s-my-mother-with-whom-i-lived&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;), which does hold me up somewhat (but I still think that&#039;s better than realizing I have to re-write huge sections because a given event &lt;em&gt;couldn&#039;t&lt;/em&gt; have happened when I first thought it did). &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;ETA&lt;/b&gt;: &lt;em&gt;Now&lt;/em&gt; if only I could count the above comment toward my word count, which is about 25% of the NaNoWriMo recommended daily average :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ha, thanks. I think (I&#39;ll have to check) by this point in the chapter (this excerpt is from the first third of one chapter, is preceded by at least a few paragraphs) it&#39;s established that we&#39;re in Virginia &#8211; and it&#39;s definitely established in terms of the whole book (this will be one of the first chapter, but not <i>the</i> first chapter &#8211; they&#39;re being written completely out of order). But, I want each chapter to stand on its own, for the most part, as stories, so these are exactly the kinds of things I&#39;ll have to check as I go along, or at least return to later.</p>
<p>I&#39;m nearly OCD about the editing stuff, and it&#39;s kind of a problem &#8211; the idea of NaNoWriMo being &#8220;save the editing for December and beyond, right now just get out the raw word count.&#8221; It&#39;s a very different approach from the one I&#39;m used to, and I think once this thing is over, I&#39;m going to try for a more reasonable middle path, where I edit as I go along (but not excessively, since that&#39;s led me to lots of dead ends before), but I shoot for at least 1,000 words a day. </p>
<p>I&#39;m kind of doubting I&#39;ll make it to the 50,000 word mark by November 30th at this point &#8211; which is okay, it&#39;s a marathon after all, and I&#39;m a first-timer &#8211; a number of participants have said it took them a few years before they made the entire word count in 30 days.  Of course, if it were only about my ability to generate words, I&#39;d be near the finish line already, between email, blogging, etc. (this morning I wrote 1,000+ words for a blog post I&#39;m not ready to publish yet) &#8211; but it&#39;s been hard to concentrate that capacity on the book, exclusively. </p>
<p>First, the material is <em>really</em> painful (albeit with enough absurdity and occasional outright hilarity that it&#39;s not &#8211; to whatever extent I can speak objectively about the matter &#8211; a bummer to read). Second, although I&#39;m using fictional forms, nearly all of it is based on things that actually happened, which must be coherent within their historical context. I tend to go off on variously useful research tangents (examples: <a href="http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/58548698/update-1-two-people-have-offered-the-term" rel="nofollow">here</a>, <a href="http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/58714308/kelloggs-sugar-pops-commercial-1972-via" rel="nofollow">here</a> and <a href="http://vmarinelli.tumblr.com/post/59043569/in-the-mid-80s-my-mother-with-whom-i-lived" rel="nofollow">here</a>), which does hold me up somewhat (but I still think that&#39;s better than realizing I have to re-write huge sections because a given event <em>couldn&#39;t</em> have happened when I first thought it did). </p>
<p><b>ETA</b>: <em>Now</em> if only I could count the above comment toward my word count, which is about 25% of the NaNoWriMo recommended daily average <img src='http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: DaisyDeadhead</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2431</link>
		<dc:creator>DaisyDeadhead</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Nov 2008 17:40:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Despite my own sloppy writing, I was once a copy editor, and old habits die hard!  &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;To wit:  &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Williamsburg, the neighborhood in Brooklyn?  Or Williamsburg, Virginia?  (People tend to assume one or the other, depending on where they live already.)  Always minimize any possible confusion for a reader.  (That doesn&#039;t mean &lt;i&gt;I&lt;/i&gt; always do this, but then, I don&#039;t write fiction.  :P  )&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Keep it up, and no slacking!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Despite my own sloppy writing, I was once a copy editor, and old habits die hard!  </p>
<p>To wit:  </p>
<p>Williamsburg, the neighborhood in Brooklyn?  Or Williamsburg, Virginia?  (People tend to assume one or the other, depending on where they live already.)  Always minimize any possible confusion for a reader.  (That doesn&#39;t mean <i>I</i> always do this, but then, I don&#39;t write fiction.  <img src='http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' />   )</p>
<p>Keep it up, and no slacking!</p>
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		<title>By: DaisyDeadhead</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2430</link>
		<dc:creator>DaisyDeadhead</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Nov 2008 17:37:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, I was a copy editor for awhile.  Old habits die hard, love.  Sorry.  To wit:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Williamsburg, the neighborhood  in Brooklyn, or Williamsburg, Virginia?  Be specific. &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Write this down and stick it on a sticky note someplace:   &quot;The less work the reader must do, the better, and minimize any possible confusion.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I was a copy editor for awhile.  Old habits die hard, love.  Sorry.  To wit:</p>
<p>Williamsburg, the neighborhood  in Brooklyn, or Williamsburg, Virginia?  Be specific. </p>
<p>Write this down and stick it on a sticky note someplace:   &#8220;The less work the reader must do, the better, and minimize any possible confusion.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: vmarinelli</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2429</link>
		<dc:creator>vmarinelli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Nov 2008 01:37:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, sweetie! Now of course due to political blogging I&#039;m way behind where I want to be on word count, and I&#039;ve only slept 2 hours out of the last 24, but after the election returns are in (*crosses fingers*) and I&#039;m rested a bit, I&#039;ll be going back at this autiobiographical (but still technically fictional) mess with all I&#039;ve got.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, sweetie! Now of course due to political blogging I&#39;m way behind where I want to be on word count, and I&#39;ve only slept 2 hours out of the last 24, but after the election returns are in (*crosses fingers*) and I&#39;m rested a bit, I&#39;ll be going back at this autiobiographical (but still technically fictional) mess with all I&#39;ve got.</p>
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		<title>By: Southern Discomfort / One last word about this &#8220;Obamabot&#8221; slander.</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2333</link>
		<dc:creator>Southern Discomfort / One last word about this &#8220;Obamabot&#8221; slander.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Nov 2008 10:24:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] in the direction of explicitly political blogging. And yes, I&#8217;m supposed to be working on a literary project. And no, I really don&#8217;t fare all that well when it comes to reacting to events as they happen [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] in the direction of explicitly political blogging. And yes, I&#8217;m supposed to be working on a literary project. And no, I really don&#8217;t fare all that well when it comes to reacting to events as they happen [...]</p>
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		<title>By: kimmy</title>
		<link>http://victoriamarinelli.com/main/?p=1007&#038;cpage=1#comment-2428</link>
		<dc:creator>kimmy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Nov 2008 00:24:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m hooked !!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#39;m hooked !!</p>
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